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Saturday, July 24, 2010

The prediction of the unseen


somewhere around the days of October 2009 ,

We both were sitting below the 'lovers tree' in front of the tuck shop. Somehow she got the idea of writing something . And then i came up with the topic "How Did i Die in 4 Days. " I never knew that what i would write , would actually become my destiny . I never knew that i was writing my future , not my imagination . See the irony of god , i blamed him so much for all the times of my break up phase , and now i see him smiling over me , saying "You wrote it yourself son."

The prediction :


How DID i die in 4 days ?

My last Breath ... It was the biggest breath in my whole life , it stayed for four long days ... and then it was gone ... Everything gone . It started with a cry ... her cry . A call from so close but so far ... she was holding out her hand, but not to touch ... but to say goodbye . They were taking her away ... she wasn't fighting ... she was going away . She wasn't helpless ... but neither was she strong . It was a fight way overpowered than her ... she was still not prepared ... time had come before time ... It wasn't her defeat ... it was mine . The long found love, was lost ... the stars were still there , but the shine was gone ... I didn't know if this showed a ray of hope ... or an indispensable eternity . But ... She was going away ... the separation was going past the time ... She was being snatched away ... with an invisible force ... I couldn't stop her ... because there was no one their taking her away ... It was she only ... and only she ... going away ... towards a crowd but still alone ... lonely now ... lonely forever ... lonely life ... and lonely death...




When i was finally over with it , we compared our writings ... She knew it herself there was no match between their compositions . Still , i always said that hers was better .Her's was a little mis-happening in her dream , just dreaming that she found a knife and thrashed it somewhere . And then whoever was passing by us , we called them up and asked them to read both and compare . And i was running to everyone , telling them in their ears "Say that her's is better . Please . " . I know her brain ,she still thinks it was just a game of mine to show the unreal perspective of my love .... as she never knew , it was way more than real .

5 comments:

  1. bro m really touchd aftr readin dis....... dnt hv any wrds to express.......

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  2. its ok bro ... i've moved on ... i'm just writing my past because what i'm gonna write about the present , people aint gonna believe it if it comes out of the blues ...

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  3. its emotional and beautifully expressed.....

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  4. thanks for you precious comment rinnie ...

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  5. Rickzz dt was damn beautiful n fably expressed, vry touchy bt i want u to write a much much better future for urslf nxt time on.. and keep on writing u may nvr knw which 1 wud turn into reality..!!! End of d day it us who make our own destiny and future with our own deeds..!!

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